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I love fantasy and shit like that. big LOTR fan. suck so bad in flash it's sad.
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"LOLZ I'm giving you constructive criticism"
That was an amazing flash movie, since everyone is going to be bending over for you from now on because this flash is so damn good I guess i might as well offer some constructive criticism, though little is possible to give.
First of all in the first scene and in some other scenes some of the movement animation was somewhat sketchy, i think you should add a few more frames for running motions, body movements, etc. secondly, body proportions in some scenes weren't all in the same proportion, make sure you keep a close eye on that, also lighting and effect were great except for some minor modifications i would suggest such as adding luster effect, maybe giving a more whymsical look to magic effects, such as when the naked "angel" shot light out of her hand you could of made it much more breath taking, also the lighting while on the young knight's face while reminiscing about his father was too simplistic, you could of added more depth, outlining his facial features.
Voise acting was damn good, detail was amazing (although some animal life in the background would of been cool, but not necessary), i love the drawing style, villains were very well drawn, and all the voices fit their characters perfectly. I hope you make more of the same great quality.
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well that was pretty intense id rather jump on a baby than blam this great work
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yeah everything in this flash is great if only all other flash were this good. i love the idea of the popstar life which looked a hell of a lot like britney spears life, ut you should of added a few things that would of made your flash for an older audience like drugs and sex corruptin gthem and leading to their downfall. the voice is great and the little girl lookin up to the popstar was also a great addition. other then that great flash and hopefully there will be more like it.
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you should work on this make it a little longer and the animation better there is nothing wrong with stickmen but im gonna have to give you a low score and tell you to work on it a little more and it should get in if it doesn't first time i found it was funny the animation and movement were quite good well atleast it's better than jerry jackson
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this isn't that bad but needs alot of work, i have no idea if this will get blammed or not but i hope it doesn't cause i've seen crappier stuff you should work on the graphics and the characters also the sound was ok but please don't use the computer voice as a narator it demeans us all
Author's Response:
"this isn't that bad but needs alot of work"
This is only a smaller project. I got a bigger project (maybe stuff are slightly better and still not great, but meh) than this.
"i have no idea if this will get blammed or not"
It will pass.
"you should work on the graphics and the characters"
I do plan to draw a Bahamut character model sometime. Afro_Stud I'll have to improve sometime, but I prefer how Afro_Stud looks there.
"please don't use the computer voice as a narator it demeans us all"
Meh, I prefer to use Speakonia for the narrator. I know a lot don't like Speakonia, but me and my friends like it.
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there's nothing new here and it's a knock off of another game but i still think it's a pass
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there is no reason for this to get on newgrounds simply because it is useless and has no plot maybe you should get a story line or an actual idea before you put worthless peices like this it will get blammed and rightly so
Author's Response:
Hi there
I should have put at the end of it: Coming soon. Although this is a experimental intro...still thank u for ur comment.
Euan
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overall this movie was pretty good, just a few things wrong with it firstly master's cheifs subtitles were hard to read because of the color comparison secondly i found that marcus wasn't true to the real marcus and lastly master cheif personality was well thought out but was put to an extreme, where it felt like he wasn't even a soldier anymore
other than that it was fine the sound was kind of off with the whole crowd effects but thats not really important, anyways that's what i think, good job
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very good andthe best part was when pico gets on him and starts beating his head in. the graphics where great and the movement was great. the sound was really well put into it. it was funny how nene died. anyways thats waht i think.
GOOD SHOW!!!
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i like the part where nene fought with convict the animation was nice the whole silent characters thing was a plus and the only thing that was wrong with it was pico received mor pain than he dealt.
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